APRIL 6, 2008, 12:01 am
The various
were as shaded as
conquest
frayed as innocence contained
shallow dimensions
within your midst
spies lancelet skies
superfly
angels in this existence
the pool of secret Cs
set sails seduction
can you hear them voice
L&E 3?.......
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I think this is one of your best poems so far.
I don't know what it's about, not at all, but it sounds like honey!!
Some poems sound like sugar would do but this one sounds even better!!
Pure honey made by professional bees and protected by honest beekeepers!!
It's simple but I don't understand it and that's what makes it beautiful as well!!
I know a girl with the name Liesl. It's a Dutch name but is it a name in this poem too??
Tell me about it please, I love it!!!!!
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Sam
...If I’m laughing at what I think I am it’s very funny... Homer Simpson
Liesl
The poem is sort of describing a person whos name happens to be Liesl which happens to be a German name for Elizabeth as well. I've always liked the name Liesl alot, and I've always wanted to use it in something I wrote as well as the word lancelet which is a tiny marine animal. I daresay Sam, you may know two girls named Liesl lol. Btw: the parenthesis at the bottom are supposed to be sound waves.
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"Sticks, rocks, food, all sundry items came into the faery donut, including my feet over my head and a little blue girl."
-- Tori Amos
Little Earthquakes songbook
Elisabeth ????? !!!
Now I like it even more, lol!!!!
Oh yea, I remember the name Liesl as a German name as well. I'm not completely sure but I think Mozart's sister was called Liesl as well....
Lancelet? Lol, I first thought you miss-spelled Lancelot
! Anyways, the poem still doesn't make any sense to me 
(I'll have to read it over and over again)
but I LOVE IT!!!!
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Sam
...If I’m laughing at what I think I am it’s very funny... Homer Simpson
Nice
your work would sound sweet spoken over "wanderlust" it really does capture a space best occupied by brass instruments.
omg
You know what I just noticed?? You posted this poem on Elisabeth's birthday. I can't believe I didn't see this before. It's easy to remember her birthday though, cuz me Ireen and her are 6 6 6
!! Ireen: Jan. 6, Elisabeth: April 6 and me: July 6!! Lol, this is all getting too creepy 
PS: sorry it's been so long you heard from me!!!!!!
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Sam
...If I’m laughing at what I think I am it’s very funny... Homer Simpson